Hahaha! I had one of my teachers in my head everytime Arial talked bad of comic sans and papyrus (I agree they are horrible, but...) That teacher used to repeat about every class not to use Arial because it's just a pale copy of Helvetica with less variations. Kinda hoped Arial's transformation to be Helvetica but windings is just as fitting! Oh man, great job! Funny thing is, almost every font used in there are fonts that are not considered exactly great by most graphic designers which made it even funnier in my eyes (come on, papyrus is unusable but so is creepy) Anyway great job!
Excellent vidéo. La fin est un peu étrange mais plutôt drôle à sa façon. Pour une première animation, le travail est d'une qualité remarquable. Les frames pour la lumière du feu étaient simplistes, mais tout de même efficace. J'aime beaucoup l'harmonie de couleur :) Bonne chance avec la suite :D
Merci! Hahaha, la fin apparemment crée deux réactions: soit les gens rient, soit ils sont choqués (je croyais pas que ça arriverait, haha).
Merci encore! :)
For a first work, it is quite good. Of what I saw, your strongest point lies in special effects and sound effects. Both were really well executed and timed. I think there is more work to put on the characters thought and the school background was pretty messy, the lines looked a tad sloppy. However, the scene etween the class and the fantasy realm was really well executed, I couldalmost feel the wind on my skin and the music was spot on. On the athosphere level, your work is impressive. Actually, it is in the drawing itself than most flaws are coming from. The camera angles were very interesting too. Also, it was said previously, but the pacing was too slow at the beggining and it added little to nothing to the plot. Continue the great job :D
Thank you very much :D this was a really helpful insight. Been away for a month now xD
Really cute story. The concept is great too. Only thing I wonder is, did Death kill the miracle survivor? Cause I don't know but they was a sort of shacking in the final, as if he would strike something :) Or maybe he just disapeared and that's the reason of the shaking. Or I'm just imagining things...
Yeh, he's dead.
Neat! Was waiting for this one for quite some time. Good job :)
Wow. Juste wow. Ça paraît que t'a mis du temps là-dessus. La qualité est simplement époustouflante. On pourrait passer l'émission à la télé et on ne verrait pas la différence :) J'ai hâte de voir ce que la série va donner.
It's really a awesome piece of work. Such a shame you took the same opening song as Blue exorcist. But for the rest you did a great job! I never thought sprites could be this lively. I'm eager to see more of it in a distant future. Keep it up!
The graphic quality was great. However, as some said before, it's a shame the ending was blurred. Thought i's a bit short and that the story is somehow hard to follow, I think the base idea has lot of potential. A thing or two made me puzzled thought; how can a brush make pencil-like strokes? The teddy's ears are full of them.... Anyway, the work in itself is impressive for a first and i'm eager to see more of your work in the future. Consider you've earned a new fan :)
lol well as to why a brush makes a pencil stroke.. the assignment in my drawing class was to create an animation about drawing.. and the dynamic paint system used to make the strokes works better with objects that have a larger surface area to mark with, such as a brush. so why didn't i just make the graphite texture a paint texture?....well...... O3O' no reason i guess. and thank you so much for your feedback and follow! ^.^
The ending pun was the best. Great work, as always ^^
It's a nice piece of work overall. The static visuals are great, however, the animation is a tad choppy, and seems to be using a drag and drop technique more than the redraw every frame one. Even though you said it was made in flash, I still have that Illustrator feeling. A song by rhapsody of fire was a good idea since it balanced the flow of animation by it's fast rhythm . Good job, I'm eager to see what you'll do next :)
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