Hahaha! I had one of my teachers in my head everytime Arial talked bad of comic sans and papyrus (I agree they are horrible, but...) That teacher used to repeat about every class not to use Arial because it's just a pale copy of Helvetica with less variations. Kinda hoped Arial's transformation to be Helvetica but windings is just as fitting! Oh man, great job! Funny thing is, almost every font used in there are fonts that are not considered exactly great by most graphic designers which made it even funnier in my eyes (come on, papyrus is unusable but so is creepy) Anyway great job!
Excellent vidéo. La fin est un peu étrange mais plutôt drôle à sa façon. Pour une première animation, le travail est d'une qualité remarquable. Les frames pour la lumière du feu étaient simplistes, mais tout de même efficace. J'aime beaucoup l'harmonie de couleur :) Bonne chance avec la suite :D
Merci! Hahaha, la fin apparemment crée deux réactions: soit les gens rient, soit ils sont choqués (je croyais pas que ça arriverait, haha).
Merci encore! :)
For a first work, it is quite good. Of what I saw, your strongest point lies in special effects and sound effects. Both were really well executed and timed. I think there is more work to put on the characters thought and the school background was pretty messy, the lines looked a tad sloppy. However, the scene etween the class and the fantasy realm was really well executed, I couldalmost feel the wind on my skin and the music was spot on. On the athosphere level, your work is impressive. Actually, it is in the drawing itself than most flaws are coming from. The camera angles were very interesting too. Also, it was said previously, but the pacing was too slow at the beggining and it added little to nothing to the plot. Continue the great job :D
Thank you very much :D this was a really helpful insight. Been away for a month now xD
Great game. No real cliffhanger here (read the finish line and you'll understand what I mean), but the universe seems so fun to discover and real twisted. I like it ! I hope you make a sequel or something in that universe, cause I want to know badly what's the deal with anon and the fusing along side the birds hate for r'ses like they say. Great game (just a tad short for the fabulous story ideas there)!!!
Its a good game. However, it would have been interesting to put a menu button in game
really cute game and the music is quite good and I don't particularly have any interest in that type of game actually :)
Really fine wip, too bad the cotm had to be with kittens in it. Quite dynamic all in all :)
OMG! Thanks! I'm happy for you comment, but i'm so sad because I translate wrong and seen only on the next day after sending to the challenge .
Nice one! She have a pretty dynamic pose while beeing relaxed, i'm not sure how to describe it, but it works! Did she catch a nasty sunburn on her way?
You mean she's cool. haha
Sunburn is what everyone gets after summer is over. I wonder.
But thank you very much miliade. Please do more analysis of my future works. I like how you are trying to find something out:D
That is some really convincing rework! Really professional rendering. Big potential winner for me here :D
Thank you for the high praise! I am glad you enjoyed the work :)
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